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 | Haiku - Rose in Crystal Vase  [ASR] Beautiful rose placed in fine crystal vase. Myriad light reflections. How long?  |
| (4.5)| HI George! Happy Earth Day!  What a lovely image you portray in your haiku. It so clearly describes this rose as it starts to lose its petals. The first line is vibrant and I feel the potency in the word "cut". I think of fresh rose and then the contrast with the image in the last line. "tearful" ties us back to the "cut" .  The second line is evocative and inspires the imagination. I would love to see this vase. I can imagine timeless moment in reflection. The haiku form is well done though it does not require captial letters or only a little punctuation. The idea is to leave it boundless for the reader to add own understanding . Thanks for sharing this vivid crafting.  Light on the path as you write on! eyestar  
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