Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing you poem as part of the Simply Positive Group. Plus, we are both participating in NaPoWriMo. I was attracted to this poem by the title and I was very surprised by the content. You have created a very moving yet depressing poem. I don't know if this is the vision you were going for but this is the image I received from your piece. I pictured a young woman taking a long bath and cutting her wrists at the end. Your imagery is perfect. The only question I have is whether you wanted to title the poem "Once Last Bath" or "One Last Bath" ?

Excellent job and I can't wait to review more of your entries!



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