Hi Lyn, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing your poem as part of the Simply Positive Group and I found your poem on the NaPoWriMo entry page. The imagery in your piece was wonderful. I could picture the whole Spring scene playing out in front of me. I found no errors in punctuation, spelling or grammar. The only suggestion that I would make would be to put a link to "Synesthesia" at the end of your piece. I looked up the form and it is very interesting.

Nice job!



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