Hi, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing your poem as part of the Simply Positive Group. I found your piece on the NaPoWriMo forum page. I loved this piece. What a wonderfully written poem. I loved it! I found no errors in spelling or punctuation. I did stumble over these lines...

In these shady grounds of a massive boot hill
Are casting shadows that creep and shrill

I became confused by what was casting the shadows in these lines. It just seems you are missing a subject in the sentence. Or perhaps I am completely off base with this and you can just ignore my comments (sometimes when it comes to grammar I don't have a clue)

Nice job!

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