Hi, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing your poem as part of the Simply Positive Group. I found your piece on the NaPoWriMo Forum page. I must admit, I too, am a chocoholic! Just like you it could be milk or plain and I would like it just as much. Your poem has great rhyming in it, none of it seems forced. I did not notice any errors in spelling, grammar or punctuation.
I did, however, stumble over the following line,

I must admit that I don’t try to make it go away.

I don't know why but this line just did not seem to fit with the rest of the poem. Now, I am not an expert, so if you don't agree feel free to ignore my comment. It is after all, your poem!
Now I am going to go get some of my leftover Easter candy!

Nice Job!



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