Hi, I am PandaPaws reviewing your NaPoWriMo entry again. Your poem is very well written and beautiful concerning Easter and Jesus. I think there may be an error with it. I think, and I may be wrong, that Jesus and his disciples were returning to Jerusalem for the Passover celebration. I think the incident of the census occurred when Mary and Joseph were returning to Bethlehem when Jesus was born. As I said, I may be off base on this.

I enjoyed reading through your entries.
Nice Job!




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