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The Passage  [ASR]
A journey of no small significance.
by JACE - House Targaryen
Review of The Passage  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hello, Jace!
This is a Simply Positive Review. *Boxcheck*

This was such a nostalgic look at bygone days of station wagons filled with kids and the family trip. I remember my uncle and aunt and their nine children piled into on of those wood-sided, heavy duty wagons. There always seemed to be room for one or two more cousins to fit-in and go to some campy spot with a pond. *Suitcase*

I enjoyed how you painted those memories in my mind. It all came alive, like I had the middle seat in that station wagon. *Pocketwatch*

Good use of the travel prompt!


Good luck with the contest, and again, thanks for entering! *Delight*

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