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| I am reviewing for Earth Day Challenge during this week, your item:
Impressions:  I am glad to see an Italian Sonnet used here. It is a somewhat complicated form. You have done wonders with it. You must have worked hard to give us such a nicely done poem. Now on to the Challenge. I am seeing here that you want to speak out about the environment and how it has changed our Earth. Very rightly so. Your opinion is very viable. I love your images. They start out strong and don't quit. It is a very good but sad message. Interesting then that it ends on a vital note: Green's last hope: another season. The hopeful line, in deed, is "Green life will find a place to dwell." I think you are finding what we all have come to notice and need to say, you know? I liked your poem.Grammar, Spelling, Style: Good grammar, spelling. Yes, your style of the method of a sonnet is excellent. Terse lines that mince no meaning. You spare no word.Suggestions: No suggestions. You did a great job and accomplished the theme you set out to speak of.Last comment: Let's make a note of this poem as one that we hope to see in a green way as people do more for the environment. Wouldn't it be a wonderful world if everyone took this to heart and it became a real pitch to do more for ourselves and our place here on this planet?  Feather Duster aka vicki
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You responded to this review 04/23/2014 @ 11:58am EDT