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 Earth Day Poem  [E]
April 22 is Earth Day. Have you been kind to Mother Earth? This is in an etheree form.
by Dorianne
Review of Earth Day Poem  
In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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The title "Earth Day Poem"  and description hooked me. The poem looks good on the page, while the rhythm flows easily from line to line.

What I liked: My favorite line is the last because it emphasizes the idea that we are responsible for taking care of Earth.

Technical Problems or Typos: None found.

Suggestions: No suggestions.

This form is a good choice for the message the poem sends. Write on.

Everyday is Earth Day!


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