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Have you ever Kissed a Mule?  [13+]
This story is to promote donkeys and mules. It is worth reading, as well as surprising.
by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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The title "Have you ever Kissed a Mule? hooked me. In this educational essay the author gives important facts about mules and donkeys, while dispelling some of the common myths about these beautiful creatures.

What I liked: My favorite sentence is the bumper sticker quote at the end of the article.

Technical Problems or Typos: In this phrase remove the line break after other's.
read each other's
mind.


Suggestions: My only suggestion is to add a picture of a mule or donkey to this article.

I enjoyed reading this essay. Write on.

Everyday is Earth Day!


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