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Hello, knowpeace. My name is Charlie and I’m happy to be reviewing your poem that I found on the "Read a Newbie" page. Thank you for sharing with us and giving me this opportunity to review. The following are just my personal opinions as a reader. I am not a professional. If you find something useful, awesome! If not, feel free to dismiss this. *Cool*



*Questiono* Title

*Infoo* The title matches the topic of the poem. That, coupled with the description, made me want to read your poem.


*Questionb* Subject Matter and Theme

*Infob* This is about remembering the happy times of a relationship, even though it isn't going to work out. I think we've all been in a relationship that we know is doomed, but we still keep in mind the things about the other person that make us happy. I think it's a normal reaction to keep the good qualities of a relationship in mind even as it's ending.


*Questionp* Flow and Readability

*Infop* There was no specific rhyming pattern or meter to this poem. It flowed smoothly with four lines per stanza. It was easy to read and comprehend your poem.


*Questiong* Tone and Imagery

*Infog* I like the imagery of "carrying the taste of emotion" and their relationship being like, "drying ashes". It has a nostalgic tone to it because we can remember the happy memories when the relationship was alive, but now it's dead and like ashes drifting apart in the wind. The best part of this poem was the imagery.


*Questionv* Possible Suggestions

*Infov* My only suggestions would be to add capitalization into the poem, both in the title and in the poetry itself. Everything else looks good.


*Questionr* Final Thoughts

*Infor* Overall, I enjoyed reading this poem and thought it was something that is easy for readers to relate to. Thanks again for sharing with us.


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