Realization [E] Happens once in a lifetime. You realize. |
Hello, Borja . My name is Charlie and I’m happy to be reviewing your poem that I found on the "Read a Newbie" page. Thank you for sharing with us and giving me this opportunity to review. The following are just my personal opinions as a reader. I am not a professional. If you find something useful, awesome! If not, feel free to dismiss this. Title I like the title of this poem because it caught my attention and made me want to read more. Subject Matter and Theme The poem itself could be about anything. It's never clearly stated, but it sounds to me like it's possibly about a love that was never a true love at all. What makes me think that is the line about never truly having something because it has gone away. If the love had been real, it would never have gone away. Flow and Readability I never quite got the flow of this one down. The first two lines rhymed, but the rest didn't seem to have a rhyming pattern or timed meter. It still flowed pretty smoothly though. Tone and Imagery There was a lot of imagery in this poem, especially when you were comparing how the weather relates to the emotions you feel about how something that you truly have never goes away. Final Thoughts Overall, I enjoyed reading this poem. It gave me something to think about and I think it could be interpreted so many different ways, depending on who's reading it. I thought it was an interesting topic. Thanks again for sharing with us! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** A Review from "Simply Positive Review Forum " ! My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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