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 | ROCKS  [E] ...more than mere gravel?  |
| (4.5)  Happy Earth Day! Hi Maria Mize! I so like rocks and gems so I was attracted to your title! The first line is potent and captured my muse attention. I liked the concept of the description and the inner rhyme rocks! "ignoble yet profound" is evocative description as is seeing it as a traveller. It has a philosophical vibe here and I am reminded of stones as carriers of history and the native beliefs around ther stone people. The first verse is fun to read and seems to have some sound scheme which the other verse lack. I see this is a free style poem without set form and it works for this musing as you hold the rock in your hands. I like how you enhance its qualities as the poem goes on and showing how precious it is by putting in your "premium"plant pot with gentleness.  I enjoyed reading your reflection on rocks, which inspires my wondering right along with you.  Light on the path as you write on! eyestar 
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