The title and description of this haiku hooked me. The haiku paint an intriguing word picture of spring in Detroit.

What I liked: This poem follows the state form, with the last line being a surprise.

Technical Problems or Typos: None found.

Suggestions: No suggestions.

I enjoyed reading this thought provoking haiku. Write on.



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