The title and the description of the poem hooked. The first stanza establishes the rhythm, rhyme scheme, and mood of the poem. The main emotions of this poem are joy and happiness. The rhyme scheme and the rhythm compliment each other and move the emotions from stanza to stanza.

What I liked: the fist stanza is my favorite because it is a good description of a humming bird in flight.

Technical Problems or Typos: None found.

Suggestions: No suggestions.

This well-written poem follows the form. Write on.



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