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Compassionate Choices   [E]
For Kiya's Earth Day Challenge; a rondeau about Earth.
by Future Mrs. B
In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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The title "Compassionate Choices "  hooked me. The first stanza establishes the rhythm, rhyme scheme, mood, and message of the poem. The rhythm is a little rough, however, id is not so rough that it distracts the reader form receiving the poems message.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite because it emphasizes the poem's message.

Technical Problems or Typos: None found.

Suggestions: No suggestions.

Write on.

Everyday is Earth Day!


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