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by A Guest Visitor
Review of winter time  
In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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The title "Invalid Item"  hooked me. The first stanza establishes the theme, mood, and rhythm of the poem. The rhythm suggest slowness and a closing down for the winter.

What I liked: This is my favorite line because it emphasizes the relaxed mood of the poem.
Absent of leaves, free to relax.

Technical Problems or Typos: None found.

Suggestions: No suggestion.

Write on.

Everyday is Earth Day!


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