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 Red Bird Blue Bird  [E]
My mother and I like to sit outside and listen to the birdsong of springtime.
by O. D. D. Cummings
In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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The title and the description hooked me. The first stanza establishes the mood, theme, rhyme scheme, and rhythm of the poem. This describes the beauty of birds singing.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite because it made me smile with the joy of birds singing.

Technical Problems or Typos: None found.

Suggestions: No suggestions.

Write on.

Everyday is Earth Day!


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