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 Happy Earth Day!   HI Shaara! Awesome alliterative title that fits your theme and purpose. I like the psychological suggestion and it is quite original and creative to speak form alligator point of view. I could imagine the drool as he watches folks. Great reason why he could not just go and chomp too!  The voice was consistent and potent and the thoughts you give the gator make sense. I had to laugh at the first observation of the description of people in clothes and "hair dos". Cute turn a round of who should be on display. The rhyme scheme is consistent with interesting and topical words. It was fun to read and easy to get into the gator mind. The personification was well done and descriptions vivid. "firecrackers" with "clackers" etc are so brilliant. I loved the last line and lovely rhyme with the image of " teethy smile". I didn't notice a rhythm pattern but the freestyle suited the crazy theme. I imagine it took awhile to discover and create how a gator might describe a person!! So entertaining and well conceived.  Thanks for sharing your inventive and comic talent. Light on the path as you write on! eyestar  
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