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 |  | Cleansing Tears  [E] If each does a little, the earth will renew. (Form: Strambatto)  |
| (5.0)| I am reviewing for Earth Day Challenge this week:
Impressions:  What an awesome entry for this year! I found your poem relating to Earth Day, Tuesday's proud existence, to be right on target. The valuable message is clear. I heed the call.Grammar, Spelling, Style: Excellent rhyme and rhythm, a nice Ottava Rima. It speaks. It has a nice formula and therefore the style is very viable and good. No spelling errors. An all roundgreat job. Suggestions: Post it somewhere. It has a message that we need to know that is quite vital. Last comment to contend with: I won't mince words. You are a fine author and your poetry excels. I want to recycle, take my hands and dig in to mulch this spring, believe. Onward Global Warming.   Feather Duster aka vicki
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You responded to this review 04/24/2014 @ 6:37pm EDT