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| (5.0)  Happy Earth Day!   HI Lynn! I like dragonfies and often watch them in the summer at the pond so I appreciate this poem and the idea of the dragon fly dance. I enjoyed the magical vibe of the expression and the reference to the "meaning" of dragon fly as a totem with words liek "illusion" and reality". I like the link to pyschological process --a message of how nature can inspire us and creatures gift us doorways.The descriptions were vivid and I like the "helicopter" image.  I could imagine sitting uder the lilac musing as natural world receives me and allows for deeper self to come forth. .I enjoyed reading the language that flowed in a dream like way. Eloquent soundscape as well especially verse 2.The form is balanced in 4 verses with consistent rhyme and rhythm and you brilliantly interspaced two differing voices or layers to the revery. What can I I say I loved it and the way you dream!  Thanks for sharing this the bit of magic and your talent.  . Like the sig too. Wow!Light on the path as you write on! eyestar  
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