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 | CO2 Is Essential to Biosphere  [E] CO2 is essential to life as we know it, Jim  |
| (4.0)  HI Reason. Happy Earth Day!   Wow! I was drawn to the title and tag line!  Jim?This is an interesting article about Co2 and its essential purpose. You have made the informations easy to understand and follow. I think you could shorten the space between your paragraphs. I can see the research that has gone into this as you share facts about how CO 2 is used and created and it was fascinating to learn that perhaps it is less a factor to global warming. You make good points about how man doesn't allow for the CO2 to retrun so plants can use it. I sense this could be a kind of thesis where you are giving evidence that C02 is essential. You use good evidence. In terms of article writing, you may tweak it to include an intro paragraph to set up your intent and a closing a paragraph to sum up your initial thesis. Just to polish it up and have it feel complete. I felt it left me hanging at the end. You write clearly and directly using scientific vocabulary and lots of detail. I did enjoy reading the information you presented and learned some things.  Thanks for sharing this piece. I felt your appreciation and strong point of view for the subject matter. Light on the path as you write on! eyestar  
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You responded to this review 04/26/2014 @ 2:46am EDT