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 Reverse Joni Mitchell  [E]
Remembering environmental idealism
by Karl Doyle
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am reviewing for Earth Day Challenge during this week:
 Reverse Joni Mitchell  (E)
Remembering environmental idealism
#1958138 by Karl Doyle


Impressions: *Check3* Really good essay. I think I know what you are talking about. It's a really big "game" for investors. I know a brand new Mall near Pittsburgh here has had huge projects like a gigantic athletic center and a race-car park, built them, used them, and it has all fallen through and torn down now. More or less, very quickly. The mall has hundreds of acres, and the space of which it has built up businesses is incredible, but slow. At times, no one wants to shop there. And the businesses like Bed, Bath and Beyond, and Macy's has fallen through. The mall itself has empty spaces. I know what you mean.

Grammar, Style, Spelling, of your essay: *Check3* Fine.

Suggestions: *Check3* None.

Last comment to contend with: *Check3* I wonder what will happen next. You know? In keeping with Green today, hope that you agree and go ahead do some recycling. We are at the brink of consciousness with keeping our planet safe and happy. Let's all do our part. Thank you. We all want paradise.


April 22nd is Earth Day!

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