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 | Offshore Drilling Should Be Banned  [13+] Offshore drilling should be banned on the this planet.  |
| (4.5)| HI Maddy! Happy Earth Day!  O wow! You make a great case for not drilling offshore. Your opinion voice is clear, never wavering from its intent and you back it up with solid evidence.  You share detailed information in an organized way from the opening thesis to the summative ending. The style and laguage suit the theme and non fiction content and pursuasive purpose. It was easy to follow your thinking, stats and dangers you refer to and I could read it read without tripping up. Glitch point: I one line you say" we can't make it any worse", I think you mean "we don't want to make it worse" or "it could get worse if we do not act." Beacause I think we certainly Can make it worse--.  I like how the thesis is centered in one area (canada} and it is apparent you have done your research. As a Canadian it is interesting to know some of the fact I didn"t know! Sharing this article brings the harm drilling issue back to our focus. The dangers and effects of spills are truly sad and will ahve major consequences on next generation--right now! Good call to add the definition too. Thanks for writing this direct and instructional article. I can really sense the pasion yo have to get this POV across in your caring for the land and its creaures ! Keep standing for the earth.  Light on the path as you write on! eyestar  
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