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 How can we create eco-friendly living?  [E]
The various aspects of leading an eco-friendly living
by Hareepriyaw alias Haripriya
Review by Nixie
In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: E | (3.5)
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Everyday is Earth Day!

Welcome to "The Earth Day Challenge"  review activity!


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Overall Impression
Your article gives a simple point by point plan any person can grasp. The formatting gives the work a polished, professional look. After reading you bio, I believe this presentation is an automatic gesture.

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A few thoughts
Last year, Amazon began asking for feedback not only on the item purchased, but on the packaging. When big companies alter their actions, society benefits from the impact.

A customer can stay away from companies that use packaging not earth-friendly.

It's difficult to know what is right when talking about recycling. Some say there's no point in trying; it's already too late for the planet to recover. Irregardless, people should continue recycling rather than giving up.

A few of the sentences lost meaning for me. I listed two examples below. Making suggestions feels wrong because all the sentences are consistent with your writing style.

One adjustment might be to shorten some of the longer sentences. Break them up for an easier read.

Fine Tuning ▼

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Closing thoughts
I think your intent is clear in my mind. One fact I did learn. It's not enough to power down electrical items. The plug itself has to be disconnected.

In the beginning, you mentioned Canadians as front-runners in this challenge. Am I to assume what you've included in this article relates the practices already in motion in Canada?

What we're all shooting for is the combined efforts of each individual impacting the planet in a healthy way. Even if it's not making much difference, at least we're not worsening the planet's suffering.

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