The first paragraph hooked me with Kaya's son calling his mother. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the way the story ended because it gives the reader something to think about.

Technical Problems or Typos: None found.

Suggestions: No suggestions.

I enjoyed reading this intriguing story. Write on.



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