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  A KOOKABURRA'S BREAKFAST  [E]
A poem of an Australian bird "The Kookaburra" and his ability to catch his meal
by Meg
In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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The title and the description of this poem hooked me. The first stanza establishes the rhythm, rhyme scheme, mood, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyme scheme compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The second stanza is my favorite because it suggest that the koookaburra enjoys catching his food.

Technical Problems or Typos: None found.

Suggestions: No suggestions.

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