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The title of this amusing poem hooked me. The first stanza establishes the rhythm, mood, rhyme scheme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace, while the rhyme scheme compliments the rhythm.

What I liked: I liked the dog pulling the vacuum's plug.

Technical Problems or Typos: None found.

Suggestions: No suggestions.

I enjoyed reading this funny poem. Write on.

Everyday is Earth Day!


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