Greetings, I am one of the Earth Day Review Challengers and offer here my comments to your poem.

The senryu form is well met, personifying Earth ("nomad") with human characteristics

Reading aloud, the images are consistent with the senryu form, where two of the lines flow together to make a statement; the third line here stands as a powerful image of its own. After first questioning the third line, upon reading agsin I sense the question in third line refers to Earth herself and as the individual life forms to which she is 'home.'

My thoughts upon reading aloud - consider separating the title from poem itself by a blank line; also consider deleting the comma after "Round" to hold it with the rest of the image in the first line. ??

Thank you once agaom for offering this powerful and provocative work, which image remaims with me after reading

Write On
Kate
Kate - Writing & Reading




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