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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: GC | (4.0)
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Review of Seduced

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Interesting seduction of Virgina by Corwin.It was very hot and the description of the emotions that Virginia was experiencing were well phrased and described. .

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

I found the plot a little confusing and did not get a full grasp of the story line until I had re-read the story. I think the concept that they had had sex before this encounter in the club or wherever Corwin was doing the presentation. The envelope left for her was an interesting development.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

She dropped articles of clothing on the stairs. Was she told to do that? She seemed to be following directions. I did not see additional notes.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

I liked the twist at the end. Well done.

Dblameck
A MEMBER OF THE HOUSE OF LANNISTER




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