Well, I'm glad they gave all the information about this style. I thought it was just free verse. lol I'd say you have it down pat. I got the impression that it needed to have negative and very different way of wording, looking at things. You did that, yet I was able to decipher and keep up.

I liked the 'flowers in the sky' that is sort of how I view them. Stood on my porch and watched this year. Sorry for the poor dog.

I liked the sweet memory about your father.

I never knew violets were a weed.

Your last verse was very touching. I felt sorry that you only saw the dying things. My grass is green and lush, my veggie garden is blooming and growing great, and my daisies are bright and flowing as the wind blows. I see so much life. Thanks for sharing this with us.

Love, LinnAnn