Review number # 6 of week July 10-16th, 2014

Hi Siobhan

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive and 48 Hrs. Read A Newbie Mission

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! I have only my humble opinion to offer; please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Genuine Ghost Experience

First Impression: Hmm, I enjoyed how the story progressed, teasing and happy like newlywed couples should be.

What I liked: How Rebecca initially hesitated but then decided to go for it.

What needs your attention: I didn't see anything.

Favorite Parts: I was amused when Nathan ran to the open door with a sheet around his hips looking for Rebecca. Then tosses his pants on goes to the front desk to inquire with the receptionist as to the whereabouts of his wife. The open door with no one visible on the security film is a perfect climatic ending to the story.

Overall Impression: The story was well written Siobhan and held my interest from beginning to end. This has the potential to evolve into a longer work. Excellent job!

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was truly my pleasure!
Lyn




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