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 Quill Street  [13+]
A look back at happy times with my grandfather. Northern England, 1970s.
by David Rhodes
Review of Quill Street  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello there, Newbie! Welcome to WDC. *Mugb*
This is a Simply Positive Review.

You know, David, I really enjoyed your story. I love nostalgic writings that bring the reader down a wonderful memory lane, through the eyes of the author.*Vignette7*

*Crayons8* You painted such clear images of yourself as a youth, hanging around with your grandpa on a Sunday afternoon, listening to his stories and walking with him to roomy spots of soil to kick around a football.

*Tophat* I loved the stories you shared that your grandpa told. Some of them were tongue-in-cheek, others were specific facts that still stir the curiosity. I guess one would question why all shades were down in daylight on one particular street. I guess night shift would be a good answer. *Wink*

I really enjoyed getting lost in this nostalgic place, with a youngster and his granddad. Memories make us relive those pictures in our minds that bring a smile to our faces. *Teapotv*

*Buttonb* The only thing I think could make this better, would be if it didn't end rather abruptly with the footballers. I think mellowing out the thoughts more and ending it with you and grandpa sharing a moment concerning both of you rather than ending with the football games and the ellipses.

That's a good thing, when the reader wants more. *Bigsmile*

Well done. *Sun*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
Web~Witch










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