maybe it should be 'broken rainbow scatter(s)

I really liked this. I have to admit, I've never heard of the fireworks rockets being likened to tadpoles before. lol I had to read it twice.

I liked how the satin greens and swirls of gold flowed and painted a great mental picture.

I might have liked the last two verses best, not totally decided. But the 2nd to last made me smile...and I like the natural stars.
Thanks for sharing this with us.
love, LinnAnn