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Life is many things, as you've written. And finally comes rest... at the end.

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I was just a wee bit distracted in stanzas 2 & 3 with the phrases "Life is a miserable" and "Live is a gorgeous." Perhaps you might consider either omitting the "a," which I realize will take away the pattern you've created. Or else replace "miserable" and "gorgeous" with a similar meaning word that will flow better with "a."

Favorite lines...

Life is a prision,
bound with many duties.
[so true!]

I liked this. It's rhythmic and at the same time tells us about what life is in different aspects. Good job.

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