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I love this!!!!!!!!!! And I love that you are so proud to be the husband of a teacher. Aw... This is so good! You have your own specialty, that's for sure!

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I think my biggest distraction here was the size of the font. Not bad, eh? The only other suggestion is:

Line 5

My Wife is a Teacher
Since you don't cap the w and t in the other lines you use this phrase, you might want to do the same in this line.
My wife is a teacher

Favorite lines... [I'd like to just put the whole darn poem in, lol!)

Over 700 bottle rockets have left her launch pad through the years
and they light up the sky like a thousand suns
They will burn brightly and their light will touch many
Partly, because they were given the right stuff by a teacher

This is so special!!! I love, love, love it! Keep up the great work! I hope to read more from you in the future!

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