Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

How I found your piece...This is the second poem you asked me to review as part of your The Genre Auction package.

First impressions...I enjoyed this poem much better than the first. You have written this with much more feeling and emotion. I feel much more invested in the narrator in this than the other. Great Job!

Was the title interesting...It is, it tells the reader exactly what we are reading.

Was the content rating appropriate...Yes, 13+ is perfect.

Did you use a specific form of poetry...A sonnet.

Did you follow the form...Absolutely! I even recognize the iambic meter in it. See, as I review you, you teach me. Reviewing is a win-win!

Was there a rhyme scheme- what was it...yes, aabb.

Did the rhymes seem forced...You followed the rhyme scheme perfectly and again none of the words seem forced within the piece. You are a master at conveying feeling and emotion within the parameters of the form, without forcing words to conform to the form.

Were words forced to fit syllable count...Again, nothing seems forced within the piece.

Was there rhythm and flow...The form itself gives flow and rhythm to the poem. You have a talent for writing sonnets. Excellent job!

Any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation...I noted no errors in any of these areas.

Things I would change...There is nothing within this piece I would change, it stands perfectly as written.

Favorite parts/lines...I liked these lines the most...

My soul I bear for everyone to see.
Please kill the beast so I can be set free.

These lines sum up your poem and make a desperate plea to all those around you to identify the beast and help you free yourself from it.

Excellent Work!


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