Hello Caroline

This poem takes me to different places i.e. your home where the sky lights up with fire lights while you lay on the grass and that place of war where your husband is stationed.
Within the short space of this poem you covered emotions and raw reality. Imagery does the magic. The air of remorse and the anticipation of a better future could be felt through the sensitive structure.
"Thinking of the freedom that our soldiers are keeping,"

It makes me think of a soldier's wife, kids and home. The families find it difficult to go through life as they wait for their beloved husbands, sons and brothers.

Structure-
Your rounded off the poem at the same place you began, as you lay on the grass. There is something touching about it. Rhyming and rhythm match well.

It flows well with visual imagery.

Write on!