Review number # 2 of week July 17-23

Hi Ken

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! I have only my humble opinion to offer; please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: God Rest Ye

First Impression: The teasing comment that you were going to write something dark drew me in like a moth to a flame.

What I liked: The anger Jess felt at the loss of Clarissa's life. I could feel the frustration in your words as I read. I did not see her dying coming as I read, excellent climax to a enjoyable read.

What needs your attention: Nothing.

Favorite Parts: Jess holding the two sticks in the shape of a cross holding off the evil spawn/gargoyle while he knelt beside Clarissa. I thought the simple kindness in gently closing her eyes and the taste of his salty tears was a perfect closure to an unsettling event in a serene location.

Overall Impression: I enjoyed reading your entry in 10 Days of Christmas in July.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .