Review number # 3 of week July 17- 23rd, 2014

Hi Intuey,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! I have only my humble opinion to offer; please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: The Empathic Fairy

First Impression: Interesting title, made me curious as to why this fairy was strikingly different.

What I liked: The image of Serenada pouting as Princess Cinnamon tried to converse with her about all she had accomplished. Instead Serenada was wrapped up in herself oblivious to the harm she was creating for the Princess.

What needs your attention: Nothing in my opinion.

Favorite Parts: How her positive influence affected the towns people, it is true that one person can make a difference if they believe in themselves, clearly Serenada did.

Overall Impression: Enjoyable read, good luck in 10 days of Christmas in July.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn