Review number # 4 of week July 17, 2014

Hi Aundria

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! I have only my humble opinion to offer; please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: The Fairy Queen's Gift

First Impression: This reads out loud very smoothly. Nice images.

What needs your attention: Nothing, the poem is very well done.

Favorite Parts: I enjoyed the closing stanza with the fairies special power to spread Christmas joy all the year instead of just the one night in the winter hour. It gives you hope that good things can happen if you just believe.

Overall Impression: God job, enjoyed reading your entry for Marci's 10 days of Christmas in July.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn






My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .