Review number # 6 of week July 17-23rd, 2014

Hi Fyndorian

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! I have only my humble opinion to offer; please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Sara's World

First Impression: It was not what I expected when I read the title.

What I liked: The vivid descriptions of Sara's painting and the joy she took in creating magic for others although her life was far from joyous with her handicaps.

What needs your attention: I felt reading it out loud that some sentences could be shorter but each reader reads things differently. I recommend you try reading it out loud yourself and see what you think.

Favorite Parts: Sara dancing and having a good time, every one needs to escape their reality for a while. The paintings Sara left behind are a delightful legacy of her imagination and joy that she shared with others.

Overall Impression: Very enjoyable story. Good luck in Marci's 10 days of Christmas in July.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .