Hello M.R. Kenney!

I found your story titled Surreal on the review a newbie page.

I enjoyed reading your story and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression:I thought the story was written very well and was very encouraging.

Scene/Setting: Getting your coffee in the morning and observing the men and what their destinations were going to be relative to yours was "surreal".

Characters: You were the main character and the story gave a peek into your life and the medical issues you are battling.

Grammar and Mechanics: I am not an English major but I did not see any errors in your piece

Suggestions: I have none for you. I think it is a powerful testimony. Thank you for sharing it.

I welcome you to visit my portfolio and offer a review on any piece that may interest you

Rozebud

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