Hello gardengirl

I was scanning the community page and your poems picture caught my eye.

I am not one to read poetry or review it but I couldn't resist your title. I am not an English major or an expert in grammar either. I am simply offering my humble opinion concerning your work.

I hope you find this feedback useful

Overall Impression: I absolutely loved the message. If you had been around during David's time, I think there would be 151 Psalms instead of 150.

Grammar and Mechanics:I though the poem was written exceptionally well. The words flowed very freely and I was able to simply soak in the message.

Suggestions: I have none for you. This was a strong message concerning God's ever presence and comfort wherever we find ourselves.

Thank you for sharing your poem. I will keep a watchful eye open for your work in the future. If its as inspiring as this work, I could use a dose of that daily !!

I welcome you to visit my portfolio and offer a review on any piece that may interest you

Rozebud

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