Some things I Like:

I saw that this was a get well limerick, so I had to take a peek at it. The fact that it's for Rhonda-- Rhonda I presume?-- made it a must read.

This really is a cute little poem. Limericks tend to make me smile. Something about that line length and rhyme pattern brings to mind happy things. Perfect for a get-well poem.

Observations & Suggestions:

I sort of expected something naughty in here... nurses and needle pricks... that type of thing. It's a limerick. Of course, I can't fault you for not being dirty.

I don't know why the doctor can't send a bill...? My mind went to "don't think of the doctor's bill!" instead-- a gentle joke for a limerick, but a joke at least. Is there some story behind this line? Why wouldn't a doctor bill her?

Anyway, the last line was lost on me. I'm used to that being the punchline, of course. I expected a bit of humor there. I wonder if it might be a joke only Rhonda will understand.

Overall, super sweet sentiment! I hope it made Rhonda smile. I wish that the last line made sense to me, but it is still a nice little poem.



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .