Dear phanpub,

This is review #3 of 6 for "Simply Positive Review Forum " 

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Sometimes finding out "who did it" is as easy as having sources close to the source. What starts out as a mystery may end up in a cover up if some members get there way.

The dialogue and discussion between the two detectives plays out well and is very believable. I could imagine being another member sitting a few stools away and hearing what was going on. The only thing I couldn't picture was if this was a bar with peanut shells on the floor or not.

Overall a great story that was a joy to read. I didn't notice any grammar, spelling or punctuation errors to comment upon.



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