Dear GaelicQueen ,

This is review #4 of 6 for "Simply Positive Review Forum " 

How did I come across your piece?
I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest" . Thanks for entering! This review is done in order to recognize your participation in the contest, as well as for me to read each entry and place my decision in with the others . We thank you for your continued support.

 I hope you can gather some useful information from the review, even if it is just to find out whether or not I enjoyed reading your piece. Remember, I am but the reader, the story is yours and you alone can decide if anything should be altered. I can merely offer my advice and opinions on what I am reading. My intentions are pure, to never do harm, only offer my view.

First let me begin by saying the layout of this story is very inviting. The large print and font used was as if I was reading a book. I kept wanting to turn the page and this set the tone and was a plus in my book.

My attention was held to the page as I followed the action clear to the end. I really liked the ending by the way. It was spooky and well thought out. I didn't predict the outcome and that is something that is rare as of late, making this a unique piece. It is well written and I didn't notice any grammar, spelling or punctuation errors to comment upon.



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