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I am reviewing your story as a judge for "What a Character! : Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! This review is done in order to recognize your participation in the contest, as well as for me to read each entry and place my decision in with the others . We thank you for your continued support.

 I hope you can gather some useful information from the review, even if it is just to find out whether or not I enjoyed reading your piece. Remember, I am but the reader, the story is yours and you alone can decide if anything should be altered. I can merely offer my advice and opinions on what I am reading. My intentions are pure, to never do harm, only offer my view.

Right from the start I pictured the setting and was immediately reading this as if Bogart were the leading character. His voice rang through as Lou spoke and instantly the action was on.

I could see this play out as if watching it in black and white right in tune with the time frame and era of the piece. This is well written and was a joy to read.

I didn't notice any grammar, spelling or punctuation errors to comment upon. The font used put a clean and crisp ink on the paper and this was read as if viewing it on screen, fluid and with motion. Great story!



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