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Review #4021447
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Christmas in July  [18+]
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         Review for entry/chapter: "12 Months of Christmas Project: Gifts of YOU
Review of Christmas in July  
Review by Lyn's a sly fox
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Review number # 1 of week July 24-30, 2014

Hi Fyndorian

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed!Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: 12 Months of Christmas

First Impression: You really gave this a lot of thought when writing it.

What I liked: Each month had really great ideas that are really easy to do.

What needs your attention: Nothing, it was perfect as is.

Favorite Parts: October is my favorite of all the months, especially having a memory night with the family.

Overall Impression: Twelve very organized and simple to do things that will help create the most awesome memories and help children become loving caring adults. You have created an excellent goal list for any family to follow. Excellent job!

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn



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