Review number # 4 of week July 24-30, 2014

Hi T J Marie

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: The Twelve Months of Christmas

First Impression: Each month is filled with fun activities for young and old.

What I liked: Wearing Santa's suit in July is definitely a test of endurance. That made me chuckle, I can see his suit in lots of different materials if this was an activity.

What needs your attention: In April, where you have "are ready for the challenge?" You forgot the word you.

Favorite Parts: August would be my favorite month I love cooking so I would have lots of fun with that activity.

Overall Impression: I thought each month would appeal to all ages and families could have lots of fun together doing the activities and creating great memories along the year.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




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